Welcome to the new version of the blog! If you have visited before, you will notice things look quite different. A massive THANK YOU to Caroline who has done my banner and character profiles. She has spent a lot of her (limited) free time making them, and for that I am immensely grateful. You're amazing and this one's for you:
It all looks quite a bit more girly than it used to, but I like it and I don't think it clashes with my target audience (although that's not really my current blog audience).
I have also added lots of new content! As I mentioned, I have added character profiles for all my main characters. You can find them on their page together with the quiz results (from the 'Which That Grey Area Character Are you?' quiz). You will also notice there is a drop-down menu which I made myself! (again thank you Caroline for sending me this tutorial) It even included a bit of coding on my part to customize them, so go me!
I have also added a library. It's a made-up place where you can read extracts from fictional books from my world. If you are a Harry Potter fan and have read 'Magical Beasts and Where to Find Them' or 'The Tales of Beedle the Bard', you will know what I mean. If you haven't read my book and want to find out a little bit more about what kind of things there are in it, then it might be worth a read.
Ok, now time to actually do some work on my book...
Monday, 27 October 2014
Sunday, 28 September 2014
Editing out the ego
From the moment I printed that first copy
of my book and gave it to a friend to read, I exposed myself to judgment. It
was the most terrifying experience of my life, except perhaps my first day of
teaching and singing a solo in my singing class last year – I learned the true meaning of ‘petrified’.
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But in return for
my bravery, I got advice.
I have done my fair share of editing and
reviewing others’ work (not least because I’m a teacher and in my field that’s
called marking English books), and I know how hard it is to be constructive, to
point at the things that require improvement without being negative or imposing
how you would have written it.
But I also know that receiving advice is
harder still. First of all you have to get over the part of yourself that says
your work is flawless and couldn’t possibly be improved. Then it’s to lick your
wounds and recover some pride. And finally, you need to decide what to do with
the advice. Not all advice is good or will make sense to you, but I’ve often
heard it said that if you get the same comment over and over again, or if it
rings true to you, then it’s probably worth acting on. Out of all the advice
and comments I have received thus far, I have only ignored a couple and that’s
because they went against what my book was about fundamentally. You can imagine
what I thought of it. Images of cattle and feces come to mind.
I have to say, though, that it’s been a lot
less painful than I had anticipated. Like my ‘writing coming-out’, receiving
advice becomes easier the more you get. I have recently given my book to
beta-read to my boyfriend, and his insights (and massacre of my book) have not
even wounded my ego one bit – and for once I say this sincerely. Not a tear,
not even a flinch of the heart.
The fact that I had stalled in the editing
process has helped, because I am grateful for a fresh pair of eyes to point out
what I no longer see but know needs improving. If anything it has actually got
me quite excited about seeing what changes he has made, and I enjoy being able
to discuss what I could change.
Another proof that, as many things
(plasters and exams amongst other things) it’s the worrying beforehand that’s
painful. Once you get it over and done with, it’s fine. Really.
So if you’re a scared amateur-writer, go
ahead, take the plunge and share your words. Yes, you know who you are. It gets
better, I promise.
Just let it go.
Saturday, 13 September 2014
Quiz time!
This is what I spent my Saturday afternoon doing: a quiz! Which 'That Grey Area' character would YOU be? I've improvise myself psychoanalyst and delved deep into your soul to find your true self... ok, maybe not.
I've only included 8 characters, and I did the quiz thinking as the character and got the right one, so phew! At least that bit works.
As I mention, some of my characters are not very nice people, and very few are people I'd like to hang out with, so don't be offended by who you get. Also, worth mentioning... this is just for fun, so don't take any of my analyses seriously!
Do go and have a look, though! You might also learn something about the story, though I'm fairly sure it's spoiler free.
Soon I will add the character profiles so you can have a closer look. Enjoy!
I've only included 8 characters, and I did the quiz thinking as the character and got the right one, so phew! At least that bit works.
As I mention, some of my characters are not very nice people, and very few are people I'd like to hang out with, so don't be offended by who you get. Also, worth mentioning... this is just for fun, so don't take any of my analyses seriously!
Do go and have a look, though! You might also learn something about the story, though I'm fairly sure it's spoiler free.
Soon I will add the character profiles so you can have a closer look. Enjoy!
Sunday, 7 September 2014
Update
A quick one to update
my progress. As I haven’t been here much, you can guess that I didn’t meet my
August objectives.
About two thirds of
the way into reading my book I hit some ‘tension’ issues, or lack thereof, and
decided it would need a heavier editing than I had thought.
I have also given my
book to some close friends to read – cue round of applause for my courage.
Overall relieved by the feedback, but since I need to do some editing I might
as well wait for their comments.
It has also been the
new school year, which has kept me busy, and kept my mind worried about other
things.
Still… more than halfway through the ‘year’ I
gave myself to finish the book, so I need to keep going. I think the Christmas holidays
are going to come in handy.
Wednesday, 20 August 2014
Hear the geeky fangirl scream
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!
Hear that sound?
Yep, it’s my geeky
fangirl scream. What’s yours?
Yesterday there was a
Q&A with BOTH George R R Martin and Robin Hobb. If you’ve missed it, then
you can start communal prayers with me that someone will put it on YouTube,
because there’s some gems in there that I’d really like to watch again.
Needless to say it was
amazing. Not just because they are fantastic authors and I love their books,
but also because even though they are incredibly successful they’ve remained
humble and human and relatable and lovely and amazing people...
They covered a lot of
ground so I won’t bore you by recapping it all, but they made some points that
I really wanted to share. It was the kind of comments that made me go, ‘Me
too!’, and when you say ‘Me too!’ to something George R R Martin has said, it
makes you glow inside a little bit.
‘Me too’ number 1:
What makes a good book?
I can’t quite remember
how the subject came up, but George (Yes, I’m going on first name terms with
them, it’s shorter that way!) was talking about what makes a reader be hooked
to a book. He was explaining that sometimes he’s reading a book that the
critical part of his mind thinks is not very well written, yet he carries on reading
and reading. Then sometimes he reads a book that the critical part of his mind
thinks is wonderfully written and the critics acclaimed, yet he puts it down
and never touches it again.
Now I completely
agree, which is why I read the Twilight series (and enjoyed them! Yes, it’s out
there now!). I think even twihards will agree they’re not literary, but it’s
bit like chocolate: it’s not nourishing, but you love it! I’ve been reading a
lot of books recently, in my attempt to cut down on the number of books on my
bookshelves, and so I’ve come across a lot more of the latter kind.
I read them and I
think, ‘Wow, I could never string sentences so cleverly,’ or ‘Wow, the way that
idea was put across was intelligent.’ But it takes me weeks to get through 150
pages. You see? They’re clever books. They’re interesting at an intellectual
level. But they’re not very engaging.
Now of course the best
kind of books, in my opinion, does both. And of course it’s largely a matter of
personal opinion. I’m a huge Harry Potter fan, and that’s because they struck a
chord with me, as well as being unputdownable. I wouldn’t go as far as saying
they are literary, but they stayed with me long after I’d read them. They were
more than just entertaining.
What I found
interesting was that, not only is it highly subjective, but both George and the
editor who was leading the interviews said they can’t tell what makes a book so
addictive. Now he’s doing it right for sure, even if he doesn’t know how, but
that’s not going to help me. Still, it’s kind of reassuring to know that even
the big guys don’t know. Kind of scary, too…
‘Me too’ number 2:
Catching butterflies
A beautiful analogy
from Robin: writing is like catching butterflies. The ideas are lovely floating
around, but then you have to try and chase them and pin them down.
As George put it, when
you write you have an idea, and as long as it’s in your head it’s perfect and
beautiful, but once you put them on paper, they become this ugly mess that was
nothing like what you had in mind. The butterflies end up all squashed and then
you cry on your manuscript.
It was the reason it
took him so long to finish any story when he was younger (cue: ‘Me too!’). A
new idea would appear, and being unwritten, was much more beautiful than what he
was currently working on.
As Robin said, writing
is hard, which is why she prefers
re-writing than first drafts, as there is something to work with (cue: ‘Me
too!’). And again, it’s both reassuring and scary to learn that it’s hard for
them too.
‘Me too’ number 3:
Doubts
I won’t go into a lot
of detail about this one, it's fairly simple: famous writers doubt too.
Robin explained that
she doubts the most once she has pressed the ‘send’ button. She had thought she
was finished, then she thinks back to her work and worries. ‘Did I change that
paragraph I wanted to change? I don’t think I did.’
And George saying that
there had been times when he had thought his writing career was over. And
talking of rejection slips. Fat chance of that now, George!
So the conclusion?
Hey, famous writers are human beings too!
They also talked about
killing characters, which is always fun. New tip for predicting who’s going to
die next in A Song of Ice and Fire: if they’re the only point of view character
in a particular place, they’re unlikely to die.
But enough talking. Time
to go and chase some butterflies.
Tuesday, 19 August 2014
In need of some editing advice
Hello! I am back after 18 days of absence
from the world of writing. I haven’t touched my book since but hopefully this
means I am now refreshed and ready to see it with new eyes!
I have this week set aside for that, and I
made a pledge on a French writing forum I visit, full of amazingly friendly
people who really helped me get motivated during the camp NaNo. I set myself
some objectives for this month, or rather what’s left of it.
It goes something like this:
In August I will:
1/ Read my novel to see if all the changes
I made during the camp NaNo work and do the job they were supposed to.
2/ Write at least 3 articles on my blog.
3/ Edit 3 chapters of the novel.
If I succeed, I will: post a surprise on my
blog, don’t know what yet.
If I fail, I will: have a lot of work to do
during term-time, which will be bad.
Regarding the editing, I have been
wondering how to go about it. Usually I edit in order, then I get stuck in the
same first chapters I have edited 1000 times over or lose momentum by the end.
Or forget I I’m in ‘editing mode’ and just become a reader.
This time I’m
thinking of doing chapters out of order, to focus on the sentence-level work, since
I’ll have checked for flow during my read-through (and it was the whole point
of the camp NaNo to start with).
So this is where I need advice. Does this
sound like a really bad idea? Writing friends, have you ever tried it? What’s
your editing approach?
Friday, 1 August 2014
The other surprise
This is quite fitting, considering the extract I posted refers to some places.
This is the hand-drawn map of my world - or the main country where the action is set, anyway. It's pretty hard to read any of the place names, to be honest. I'm trying to get a better version drawn, either by hand or digitally. If you fancy helping, feel free to leave me a message!
This is the hand-drawn map of my world - or the main country where the action is set, anyway. It's pretty hard to read any of the place names, to be honest. I'm trying to get a better version drawn, either by hand or digitally. If you fancy helping, feel free to leave me a message!
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