Saturday, 28 February 2015

To write or be published



A while back I wrote a post about ratings on goodreads, my bottom line basically being that different people have different tastes. Someone’s trash is somebody else’s treasure (or if you’re like me, you love your trash).

More insightful, perhaps, is this quote James posted in the comments:

"It’s not the job of the artist to give the audience what the audience wants. If the audience knew what they needed, then they wouldn’t be the audience. They would be the artists. It is the job of artists to give the audience what they need." –Alan Moore


And it’s got me thinking.

A lot of advice to writers I read is about getting published (see my toolkit to know what I mean). From what I understand, publishers are very timorous. They buy what they know will sell. So if I want to be published, I need to write what sells. And I understand that. I don’t think studying the market is a cynical way of writing. After all, why should anybody take a financial risk on my behalf? How can I expect to be read if I don’t write something people want to read? Good writing takes into account the audience and how the reader will be gripped – even my nine-year-olds learn this. Fine. Don’t write shite and expect others to read it.

But I don’t think it’s that simple.  I recently read this interview with a literary author whose book, Even the Dogs, I had just read – the book is depressing and certainly literary, but also very clever, in a way I will never be able to write. The part of the interview that struck me was this:

"When I started writing Even the Dogs I decided to ignore any concerns about readers who might not buy into what I was trying to do: to write the book as I wanted to write it, and wait to see what happened."

Of course, as a literary writer he is allowed, even expected, to be experimental. The kind of writing he admires is ‘barely readable’ (his own words). I am writing genre fiction, as mass market as it gets: YA. Not quite comparable. Yet I do think there is something true there.

Yes, I would love to be published. And I have studied pace and points of view and all of those good tips and techniques to make my writing better. As good as I can possibly make it.

But I spend my weekends and holidays writing because I love it. I love Lacie and Rowan and Meuriaden and Faerie more than publishing. And if getting published meant that the changes I was required to make corrupted the core of my book and its message – and it might well be that my current plot/ characters/ story are unmarketable at present without massive changes – then I’d rather carry on as I am now: an amateur holiday-time writer.
I'm not saying there is always a dichotomy (unlike my title suggests), and still hope for a bright future for my book. But if it doesn't turn out like that, at least I have written the book I wanted to write. If I find out it’s not publishable, well… tough.

In the meantime, I’ll carry on trying to make it as close as possible to what I want it to be.

Saturday, 21 February 2015

After party

So...


Thank you to everyone who came and in particular all those who commented. 39 comments! Ok, so about half of them are my replies, but still. I am deeply moved that so many people took the time to come.

Now there's two more things that have come out of this party.
1. I need to make a page about writing resources.
2. We have a winner! I forgot to mention it again, but as I had previously said, I have picked a commenter at random (using the random number generator on Excel... At least I've remembered one thing from statistics lessons at uni). This lucky winner will get not only to read a never-before-seen chapter, but also have their own guest blog here.

And the winner is...

Clara!!!

Congratulations Clara (or maybe commiserations?) Really looking forward to your post - I hope you're up for it!

Happy Birthday to me!


Welcome, welcome!



Come on in and make yourself at home.

Cake? Glass of champagne? Are you sitting comfortably? Is the music ok?

All right, fine, I need to calm down.

Welcome to my blog’s virtual birthday party. The idea is that you leave comments and I reply or you reply to each other. So get commenting!

Here are some of the things you might want to have a look at:
What the book is about
Who the characters are - or take this test to find out which character you are the most like!
Perhaps you’d like to learn more about the world in the library
Or you want to have a sneak peak at what I’m writing by reading some excerpts
Or maybe you want to start a debate and argue on one of my opinion posts.

Whatever you choose, feel free to comment on any post, even old ones.

There is also a Q&A post, so if you have any questions for me, you can leave them there and I’ll answer them.

Just remember to be nice and cordial to each other, even if you think this is all pants and why on earth any adult in their right mind would write a story about fairies.

Have fun!

Q&A

This is the place for you to ask any questions you want answered during the amazing fantabulous Virtual Party! Or anytime, really.


For the love of numbers


And so a year has passed. A year since my big coming out. And what a year it has been:

  • 43 posts
  • 80 comments (including my responses)
  • 1854 page views (nearly 50% more if you ask blogger rather than google analytics, but it can inflate the number of page views because it includes bots)
  • 680 sessions
  • 327 users (people)


Now if you know a lot about blogging, you’ll probably think all these numbers are pathetically small. But to me it’s a big deal. 1854 page views! Considering only people I know visit this blog, it feels like a lot. When I wrote the first post, I didn’t even know if anyone would bother to come and read it. I didn’t know if people were going to make fun of it.
So thank you to everyone who has come, even just once. Thank you to all those people who come discreetly, but then tell me they think it’s great I’m doing a blog. Thank you to those who comment, even on the French version (which is on hold for the time being). Thank you for the feedback.



Of course, the really important numbers are the ones about my book.
2014 is:
25,000 words of brand new (or completely rewritten) material
5 new chapters and 7 new scenes
Over 82, 000 words of edits
And many, many words cut out (I haven’t counted those).

The book is currently about 130,000 words long and I have about 50k left to heavily edit before I do a final editing for style. The current plan is to finish this summer. If you’re interested in beta-reading the book, or part of it, especially for the writing (no further rounds of editing that will affect plot or characters), then do get in touch!

Thank you to everyone who has supported me this year, be it through kind words or by pushing me to write a little bit more. I feel I can finally see the end at the light of the tunnel.


Saturday, 31 January 2015

This was the year – book, interrupted


You might have noticed my absence, and if you have, I am both sorry and impressed.

I did a lot of work over Christmas, in spite of the family situation (which I don’t really want to go into here). I edited over 25k of words, some of which required some heavy re-writing. I still have the first chapter from hell to edit rewrite, and then about 2 chapters of Rowan and 6 chapters of Lacie. It’s about 45k still of editing though hopefully it won’t be any nearly as difficult as Stus’s stuff.
Ideally I’d also like to have another read through to try to cut down on superfluous words and phrases. The book is long – over 130k – and way too long for a YA novel. But I also think it’s roughly the size it needs to be. After all, I have two plots intermingling and so really I have two stories in one. But if I have any chance of this working, I need to make sure the writing is as tight as I can possibly make it.

Unfortunately, that won’t be any time soon. Easter is the closest I think I’ll be able to even glance at the damn thing.
If you’re following, then yes, it means I haven’t made it. This was the year I finished. This was the year I finally let go, and it looks like it might be another six months at the very least. 'The Year' finishes on the 19th February.

But my current circumstances mean I can’t focus on my book right now. It’s a ‘now or never’ moment in my professional life, which means that it’s my priority and takes up all of my energy, creativity and time (and health).
Anyway, I like to think positively. The point of this year, this blog, was to get me back to writing, after a disastrously writing-free 2013. And from that point of view, it has been a massive success.

So in a few weeks’ time, when it is the one-year anniversary of this blog, I will hold a little something special to thank you all for following and give a summary of my progress.

But in the meantime, and all the way until Easter, it will be a bit of a downtime here. See you at the other end.

Saturday, 15 November 2014

The good thing about Goodreads




I like Goodreads. It's great to find indie books that no one else knows about (I found The Last Falcon through it and thoroughly enjoyed it). They hold competitions where you can win books (although I've yet to win any). It has a large forum with lots of different groups you can join to discuss books and writing. You can get in touch with authors and, if you're an author, you can have a platform to reach readers.

But mostly it has reviews.

I don't know if anybody has done any statistics on Goodreads ratings but I would guess the average would be around 3.8. And also I disagree with a lot of them. Example:

A Great and Terrible Beauty (loved): 3.78
Evernight (hated): 3.66

The difference is small.


Doing a quick search, these are the average ratings for bestselling YA books:
The Hunger Games: 4.4
Harry Potter (1): 4.38
Twilight: 3.56
The Maze Runner: 4.02
Gone: 3.87
Inkheart: 3.83
Uglies: 3.87

These are the average ratings for some indie books:
The Last Falcon (read in one day): 3.67
Switch! The Lost Kingdom of Karibou (gave up): 4.46
Switched: 3.89 (this was a self-published book that became a bestseller and was picked up for traditional publication)
Arrow of the mist (haven't read yet): 4.22
Altors (haven't read yet): 4.25

And not an indie, but not so well known: The Night Circus: 4 - this was very pretty but I hated the plot and the characters.

Another example of differences depending on the version is Stargirl, a book I absolutely loved when I was a teenager: the one book version is rated at 3.76 for book 1 and 3.78 for book 2, but the boxset is rated at 4.05.

Other famous sci-fi/ fantasy books I've read:
Transition (Ian M. Banks): 3.82
The Assassin's Apprentice (Robin Hobb): 4.1 or 4.27 (depending on the version)
The colour of magic: 3.94 or 4.15 (depending on the version)
The Lies of Locke Lamora: 4.27


Now of course, the averages for the famous books are from over 10,000 ratings (sometimes considerably more), whereas for lesser known books it can be from a dozen or up to a few hundreds, so it's not a fair comparison. Also the readership is different: the rater for Ian Banks is not going to be the same person as the rater for Harry Potter - well, unless they're like me.

My point is that the difference in ratings between great books and average books is small, and sometimes null. Books that frustrated me are loved by some, and books I love are hated by others.

What gives me hope is this: people have different tastes. 

Not to say that I won't accept feedback - I always (over)think about it. But it helps me get over the fact that not everyone will like my story. Not everyone will like my character and my world.

And that's ok. I only hope that some will.

Now there's loads of other things involved in rating books, so if there's anything you've noticed, please leave a comment. Let's get a discussion going!